Game of Thrones: Paladin of Old Gods

A boy dies as a result of friction between a demon and an angel. He will have to be compensated and... Read more A boy dies as a result of friction between a demon and an angel. He will have to be compensated and it will be his lawyer who will fight for him to get what he wants most… Collapse Fanfiction, Game of Thrones, Medieval, ASOIAF, Kingdom Building, Reincarnation, Male Protagonist, Weak to Strong The concept behind the novel isn't bad, the powers are quite unique and interesting, whilst the pace is alright. Ton's of people want the MC to grow up faster, i understand that but don't think thats the problem. In actuallity if the author updated regularly (once a day) the pace of the novel would seem much better. The fights are some of the best I have read for GoT fanfic... period. The fight at bear island was amazing and so was the fight on the iron islands. Wish more epic battles were fought. My only true problem with this novel is the power scale and complexity of the worlds history. The power scales up way to fast and doesn't really feel at all like game of thrones. The original story seems trivial in the face of such a gap in power and the abilities of some characters are absurd. This novel would be goated if it had a faster pace, consistent uploads, lower power scale, and less complex history. A quarter of the time he's cringe and the author probably should have started ant 10 not 5 With that type good fun read The antagonistic is well though out Mc needs work Not bad but boring dropped 98 I like it .it has Kingdom building and new story . people who didn't read orginal got book can read it .it has fun time but over daramtize I`ve tried. MC started from childhood and it goes on for many chapters. For me, a child of 5-10 years old is a bad idea for a political game with other characters from GOT. who most participates in the political game is his father and uncle, he only gives socio-economic ideas. he only goes to the game when he is almost an adult for westeros society. At the age of 12, and seeing Barristan Selmy's achievements, 12 years and achievements in battle is not such a scary thing in this world. Pretty good, at least better then most generic stuff on this site. Though i feel like the author has not really captured the essence of the original characters that well and i just wished he did not implement his own history and recreate the lore............. This is just plain boring, I like GOT fanfic so i tried giving this a try multiple times but the reading itself feels tedious instead of being fun and interesting. The best one i've read is from cornbringer Game of Thrones: The Prideful One, others just try to imitate OG books poorly. I`ve read "Game of Thrones: The Prideful One". It`s good. I've never seen such shit being commented on this site, you want to compare a fully summarized novel, which runs over any secondary plot even the main one is extremely run over Prideful One is an example of how not to create a fanfic work, totally shallow with fanservice that died during the beginning to the middle of the novel with this not a masterpiece but a good work.My friend, this novel is the only fanfic of got that I've seen since the series was created by HBO ended the first season, if you want to read a fanfic novel with forced timeskip,Go read something on the raw site because there's no shortage of it there. This novel is the only fanfic I've seen that has any work on the MC and those around him, the rest is up to the Go read something on the raw site because there's no shortage of it there. This novel is the only fanfic I've seen that has some work on the MC and those around him, the rest is slap in the face and billions of kowtow The problem with the story is that the main character is a young child most of the time. That is not fun! It would have been fine if he was at least a teenager. It's sounding more like you guys want sex and fights, bloodshed and slaps in the face, than a good story. the protagonist is a child but being a child, he gets to play the game of thrones.he doesn't go with the face of a silly child and starts playing the game of thrones, he uses his parents and uncles, he uses adults to play the game of thrones. if he had a time skip out of nowhere, his teenager,it would be boring, he would conquer what he conquered easily because no one read it, he had to be born at the right time to play the right way. or else he would be killed by the ironmen.People who like the novel want to see fanservice, not a well-made fanfic. they want to see Duncan f#ck Sansa, Daenerys or whatever ass. Children playing game of thrones are stupid? That is extremely unrealistic, to play Game of thrones you need to be at minimum a teenager. Unreal but the protagonist has the mind of an adult with knowledge and powers acquired after a legal battle between angels. Let's face it, most readers of this site,Come here with your penis in your hand, not wanting a good story You got no argument. The mc can be a genius for all I care it doesn't matter because nobody would take the boy seriously. In canon adulthood is considered 16 before then it's the regency for the young lords/kings where even the king could be powerless as happened with Jaeherys Targaryen where he had to run away from his own court and regent. Ohhhh no, I have no arguments!!!Alright my brother, I have many arguments, but I don't write because the minimum chance of someone reading it or simply giving a negative vote just because it's a big text, is high. Not worth it.In canon the adult age is 16 but you mention the jahaerys, It makes no sense, it's the south, not the north. The author took care of that, he put the religious and united society of the north plus the love of Duncan's father for Duncan to make his plans And even if there's a chance Duncan won't be heard or the kid with silly ideas will simply be ignored, it wouldn't make sense to take that route, it wouldn't be a good story. The author didn't take care of that, it was a naive and stupid explanation without any sense of how humans would behave. As if written by an autist or anti-social person. And don't even speak nonsense about some downvotes, lol. You care about some downvotes on a pirate site?! Plus you downvoted bro. Each chapter is at least 3k words long, ASOIAF is about gray humans, Martin himself can't manage f#cking characters. Example is Robert killing the rhaegar with just 1 hammer blow and a few days later he laughs at the death of the rhaegar's wife and children.Robert a hot blooded man seeing the man who "raped" the woman he loved,Only let rhaegar die with 1 coup de grace, without ripping rhaegar to shreds, per Martin's explanations: he's a man of honor with badass warriors But later in king's landing, he laughs at the death of 1 woman, 1 child and 1 infant Then you ask a fanfic author to try to create a story using Characters quoted on 1 page of a book, how he would react to having his son a genius blessed by the gods.I don't care about downvotes on random comments, I care about negative comments on comments with facts, opinions from those who have read and seen plot errors in a novel,And because the person liked it too much because the MC just eats every hottie in the way, he gives a downvote along with other like-minded monkeys. What the hell are you talking about? I mean power fantasy is fun once in a while. But are you actually saying this shitty powerfantasy fanfic is better than the real novel? You know how to read?Do you know how to interpret text?I'm saying all the time, that people compare fanfic to the original, because the MC doesn't get f#cked every 1 chapter, Why would Martin do that, since his dad could disagree with him, Because his father had a gray personality, because in ASOIAF all the characters have a gray personality.But damn you asked for this, when even Big George couldn't create gray Characters.I'm explaining how people who don't like this fanfic because it's not the original When not even the author of ASOIAF can control the world building itselfI'm explaining that people who don't like this fanfic because it's not the same, the world building is not the same as RR Martin's ASOIAF They ask for a "world building control" when not even George RR Martin can control the world building itself I'm intruding in the middle, but I'm already talking about the real thing."it's certainly more fun". but with time it becomes nauseating? for sureafter all, human beings like to see new things, even if they don't want to leave their comfort zone.so when an asshole like you comes along to say that the original novel is cooler than wish fulfillment fiction, you deserve to get a little more from life, after all, yours has been too easy for you to come home tired and, on top of that, find your life lacking in realism, I believe that both are good, and each has its role in human entertainment sounds like you want a disney flick. you know you are commenting on a game of thrones fanfic right? Which target audience do you think it would attract? Curses my mother, but it doesn't make me a Disney fan I wanted it to appeal to people with a taste for good history, an original story on top of ASOIAF, not rushed by battles and sex. Honestly, I expected this kind of people not to enjoy reading (as a "fan" of GOT not ASOIAF) ignore the other comments, this fanfic is top notch. from the way the protagonist enters the political scene as someone important, From taking advantage of the post-Robert Rebellion instability in Westeros, to investing in an underserved industry and becoming someone powerful in the North.Everything was built with care from a true fan who wanted to save his favorite characters from the bad fates that the great George built in asoiaf There are almost no normal novels in this update. Why add fanfiction? Rank: E